Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13

[Christer Holmberg <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

> > - Requirements
>> -- REQ-4: Isn't this requirement already covered by REQ-3?
>
> No. Req-3 claims for a mechanism for the recipient of a message to
> determine whether the receive message is private or regular.
>
> Req-4 claims for the a mechanism to send private messages.

True. I didn't realize Req-3 was related to the recipient.

>> - There is no definition/reference for "roster".
>
> Roster is a not a technical term. According to the Merriam-Webster
> dictionary, there are two entrances for "roster":
>
> 1
>   a : a roll or list of personnel
>   b : such a list giving the order in which a duty is to be performed <a
> duty roster> c : the persons listed on a roster
>
> 2: an itemized list
>
> I think the term is clear when we use it in the context of a conference
> with participants.

Ok.

Regards,

Christer





On 11/02/2012 11:13, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document:                  draft-ietf-simple-chat-13
> Reviewer:                   Christer Holmberg
> Review Date:              12-02.11
> IETF LC End Date:     12-02-06
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
>
> Summary:          Ready, but some additional text may be needed based on the minor issues.
>
> Major issues:     None
>
> Minor issues:
>
> - The second paragraph of section 7.1 says that a NICKNAME request MUST contain a Use-Nickname header, but in the sixth paragraph the inclusion is a SHOULD.
>
> - It is not clearly indicated whether the Use-Nickname header is allowed for other methods than NICKNAME.
>
> - Section 8 does not specify whether there are SDP offer/answer considerations/restrictions associated with the new attribute. For example:
> -- Must the attribute tokens in an answer be a subset of the tokens in an offer?
> -- Can an SDP answer contain an attribute if the offer didn't?
> -- If a user sends a new SDP offer within a session, can the token values be modified? What does it mean if the attribute is not present in a new SDP offer?
>
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> - Sometimes the document talks about "multi-party chat", "multi-party conference", "conference", and "chat room". Would it be possible to use more consistant terminology?
>
> - Requirements
> -- REQ-4: Isn't this requirement already covered by REQ-3?
> -- REQ-6: Change "progress" to "duration" or "length".
>
> - There is no definition/reference for "roster".
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
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