Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 29 January 2013 15:38 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03
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Hi, Thank you. Best Regards, Meral -----Original Message----- From: Fernando Gont [mailto:fgont@si6networks.com] Sent: January-29-13 8:30 AM To: Meral Shirazipour Cc: draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers.all@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03 Hi, Meral, Thanks so much for your feedback! -- Please find my comments in-line... On 01/29/2013 03:55 AM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . [....] > > Nits/editorial comments: > > [Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to > "[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though > mentioned in abstract) > > [Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after > "Certification Path Advertisement messages" I will apply the suggested edits to the next rev. Thanks! Best regards, -- Fernando Gont SI6 Networks e-mail: fgont@si6networks.com PGP Fingerprint: 6666 31C6 D484 63B2 8FB1 E3C4 AE25 0D55 1D4E 7492
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Meral Shirazipour