[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 29 January 2013 06:55 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these nits along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-01-29 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-29 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: [Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to "[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though mentioned in abstract) [Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after "Certification Path Advertisement messages" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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