[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-eman-requirements-10.txt

[Francis Dupont <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-ietf-eman-requirements-10.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20130125
IETF LC End Date: 20120125
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2: very inconsistent use of caps: I propose to put the first letter
  of all words in upper cases. And of course apply this to titles (in the very
  unlikely case the ToC is not auto generated)

 - ToC page 3 and 11 page 23: Acknowledgements -? Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 4: IT -> Information Technology

 - 1 page 4 and others: why Power State and not power state? I believe it
  comes from a document where you imported the term from?

 - 12 pages 23 and 24: Telcommunication -> Telecommunication (twice)

 - Authors' Addresses: please use the full names of countries (surface mail
  was not yet converted to ISO IS 3166 as far as I know :), so:
   DE -> Germany
   IN -> India (or Republic of India?)
   BE -> Belgium

Regards

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