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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-eman-requirements-10.txt

Juergen Quittek <Quittek@neclab.eu> Wed, 13 February 2013 14:50 UTC

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From: Juergen Quittek <Quittek@neclab.eu>
To: Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>
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Hi Francis,.

Thanks for your confirmantion.
    Juergen

On 13.02.13 15:06, "Francis Dupont" <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:

> In your previous mail you wrote:
>
>>  > - ToC page 3 and 11 page 23: Acknowledgements -? Acknowledgments
>>  
>>  Well, both is possible.  I changed it as suggested.
>
>=> it is a standard US vs UK English...
>
>>  > - 1 page 4 and others: why Power State and not power state? I
>>believe it
>>  >  comes from a document where you imported the term from?
>>  
>>  The capitalized term is defined in the terminology section.  Is this
>>OK?
>
>=> it is OK (and a point for the RFC Editor): I just wanted to understand.
>
>Thanks
>
>Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

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