[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05
Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 05 February 2021 23:56 UTC
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Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 2021-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05 IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-18 Summary: This document specifies the Deterministic Networking MPLS data plane when operating over a TSN sub-network. I have some minor questions to the authors. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Page 5: Could you please describe what the "TSN treatment" comprise? - Are the security considerations the same for TSN-unaware that are for TSN-aware nodes? - How are the privacy considerations for those? It would be nice to mention explicitly how or where (I-D.ietf-detnet-security???) the privacy considerations are addressed for TSN-unaware and TSN-aware nodes Thank you for this document Ines.
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