Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-12
Ken Murchison <murch@fastmail.com> Mon, 08 April 2024 12:04 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-12
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Hi Roni,
Thank you for the review. Responses inline below.
On 4/8/24 7:26 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2024-04-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-14
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with a nit
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> In appendix B2 I noticed that the order of ut/local and standard/wall has
> changed comparing to RFC8536 but did not see any mention of the change in
> appendix D. Is this on purpose?
This change was part of the following bullet point:
* Addressed errata [Err6426
<https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/export/125234b0-57c4-4df6-8760-e54b74ff7e76/draft-murchison-rfc8536bis.html#Err6426>]
and [Err6757
<https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/export/125234b0-57c4-4df6-8760-e54b74ff7e76/draft-murchison-rfc8536bis.html#Err6757>]
as well as several other errors in the examples.
--
Kenneth Murchison
Senior Software Developer
Fastmail US LLC
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-murchi… Roni Even via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-mu… Ken Murchison
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-mu… Ron Even