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Ron Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 10 April 2024 09:36 UTC

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From: Ron Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Apr 2024 12:36:17 +0300
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-12
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Hi Ken,
Thanks for the clarification
I have no more qusetions
Roni

On Mon, 8 Apr 2024 at 15:04 Ken Murchison <murch@fastmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Roni,
>
> Thank you for the review.  Responses inline below.
>
>
> On 4/8/24 7:26 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
>
> Document: draft-murchison-rfc8536bis-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2024-04-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-14
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with a nit
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> In appendix B2 I noticed that the order of ut/local and standard/wall has
> changed comparing to RFC8536 but did not see any mention of the change in
> appendix D. Is this on purpose?
>
>
> This change was part of the following bullet point:
>
>    - Addressed errata [Err6426
>    <https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/export/125234b0-57c4-4df6-8760-e54b74ff7e76/draft-murchison-rfc8536bis.html#Err6426>
>    ] and [Err6757
>    <https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/export/125234b0-57c4-4df6-8760-e54b74ff7e76/draft-murchison-rfc8536bis.html#Err6757>
>    ] as well as several other errors in the examples.
>
>
>
> --
> Kenneth Murchison
> Senior Software Developer
> Fastmail US LLC
>
>

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