[Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09
Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Fri, 31 January 2014 18:13 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 31 January 2014 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 06 February 2014 Summary: Ready. Thanks to the authors for addressing LC comments. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: One nit escaped: s3.1, para below Fig 1: s/and are by not exhaustive:/and are not exhaustive:/
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