Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09

"Paul E. Jones" <paulej@packetizer.com> Fri, 31 January 2014 19:22 UTC

From: "Paul E. Jones" <paulej@packetizer.com>
To: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
Date: Fri, 31 Jan 2014 19:22:14 +0000
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Thanks.  I made the correction in my local copy.

------ Original Message ------
From: "Elwyn Davies" <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>
To: "General Area Review Team" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts.all@tools.ietf.org
Sent: 1/31/2014 1:13:33 PM
Subject: Gen-art telechat review of 
draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09

>I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>< http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
>Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
>or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>
>Document: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09
>Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>Review Date: 31 January 2014
>IETF LC End Date:
>IESG Telechat date: 06 February 2014
>
>Summary: Ready. Thanks to the authors for addressing LC comments.
>
>Major issues:
>None
>
>Minor issues:
>None
>
>Nits/editorial comments:
>One nit escaped:
>s3.1, para below Fig 1: s/and are by not exhaustive:/and are not
>exhaustive:/
>

[Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-i… Elwyn Davies
Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ie… Paul E. Jones
Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ie… Jari Arkko