Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09

Thanks, all. 

Jari

On Jan 31, 2014, at 2:22 PM, Paul E. Jones <paulej@packetizer.com> wrote:

> Thanks.  I made the correction in my local copy.
> 
> ------ Original Message ------
> From: "Elwyn Davies" <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>
> To: "General Area Review Team" <gen-art@ietf.org>
> Cc: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts.all@tools.ietf.org
> Sent: 1/31/2014 1:13:33 PM
> Subject: Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
>> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-09
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review Date: 31 January 2014
>> IETF LC End Date:
>> IESG Telechat date: 06 February 2014
>> 
>> Summary: Ready. Thanks to the authors for addressing LC comments.
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> None
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> None
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> One nit escaped:
>> s3.1, para below Fig 1: s/and are by not exhaustive:/and are not
>> exhaustive:/
>> 
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