Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-lmap-use-cases-05

Thanks for the response. I removed sections that do not seem to need further discusson.

> On Dec 15, 2014, at 4:32 PM, <philip.eardley@bt.com> <philip.eardley@bt.com> wrote:
> 

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> OLD
> 
>      o Understanding the quality experienced by customers. Alongside
>      benchmarking competitors, gaining better insight into the user's
>      service through a sample panel of the operator's own customers.
>      The ISP requires a performance viewpoint of the end-to-end
>      perspective, which includes: home/enterprise networks; peering
>      points; Content Delivery Networks (CDNs); etc.
> 
> PROPOSED NEW
> 
>      o Understanding the quality experienced by customers. The network operator would like to gain better insight into the end-to-end performance experienced by its customers. This could incorporate home and enterprise networks, and the impact of peering, caching and Content Delivery Networks (CDNs).

Looks good, but do you expect the last sentence to be exhaustive, or are those just examples?

>>> - 3.1, 1st para:
>>> 
>>> Can you provide a definition or reference for "mean opinion score"?
>> 
>> Not addressed.
> 
> If a reference is really needed, then i guess http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mean_opinion_score will do.
> 

On a quick search, it looks like that's at least discussed (and maybe defined) in ITU-T P.800.

http://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-P.800-199608-I/en

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> 
>>> -- 4.2, 3rd paragraph:
>>> Can you offer a definition for "probes"?
>> Not addressed.
> 
> I don't want to address this one. Formal terminology is in the LMAP framework, including the definition of "measurement agent". In this document we used the more informal term "probe", as it seems easy to understand without a formal definition. Since this use cases doc might have a wider readership, we wanted to avoid terminology and just give the reader the motivations and usages of LMAP measurement information.

Could you offer an informal definition, or a "such as [example]" sort of thing? "Probe" has many meanings. Context might be enough for some readers, but possibly not all.

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