Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Mon, 19 September 2011 08:23 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11
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Thanks for your review, Mary. Jari On 16.09.2011 18:57, Mary Barnes wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11 > Reviewer: Mary Barnes > Review Date: 16 September 2011 > IETF LC End Date: 29 September 2011 > > Summary: Ready. > > Nits: > ----- > If other changes are required, suggest that the following be fixed, otherwise, RFC editor will fix. > > - Section 4.2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "also be" -> "also" > - Section 4.2, 5th paragraph, 2nd sentence: "can supported" -> "can be supported" > - Section 4.3, next to last paragraph, last sentence: "as as" -> "as" > - Section 4.4, 1st paragraph after list, 2nd sentence: "Map-Rqeuest" -> "Map-Request"
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11 Mary Barnes
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-… Vince Fuller
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-… Jari Arkko