Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11
Vince Fuller <vaf@cisco.com> Fri, 16 September 2011 18:04 UTC
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From: Vince Fuller <vaf@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11
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> Nits: > ----- > If other changes are required, suggest that the following be fixed, > otherwise, RFC editor will fix. > > - Section 4.2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "also be" -> "also" > - Section 4.2, 5th paragraph, 2nd sentence: "can supported" -> "can be > supported" > - Section 4.3, next to last paragraph, last sentence: "as as" -> "as" > - Section 4.4, 1st paragraph after list, 2nd sentence: "Map-Rqeuest" -> > "Map-Request" Thanks. Changed in the current .xml draft that also includes several grammatical/spelling fixes from Jari. Will be issued as -12 as part of the Last Call process. --Vince
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11 Mary Barnes
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-… Vince Fuller
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-… Jari Arkko