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[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11

Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com> Fri, 16 September 2011 15:55 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11
Reviewer:  Mary Barnes
Review Date:  16 September 2011
IETF LC End Date:  29 September 2011

Summary:  Ready.

Nits:
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If other changes are required, suggest that the following be fixed,
otherwise, RFC editor will fix.

- Section 4.2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "also be" -> "also"
- Section 4.2, 5th paragraph, 2nd sentence: "can supported" ->  "can be
supported"
- Section 4.3, next to last paragraph, last sentence: "as as" -> "as"
- Section 4.4, 1st paragraph after list, 2nd sentence: "Map-Rqeuest" ->
"Map-Request"

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