Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt
Michael Tuexen <tuexen@fh-muenster.de> Sun, 02 November 2014 20:52 UTC
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On 30 Oct 2014, at 12:05, Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt > Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov > Review Date: 30 October 2014 > IETF LC End Date: 24 October 2014 > IESG Telechat date: 30 October 2014 > > Summary: Ready (with nits) > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > On page 6 the first reference to UTF-8 needs a Normative Reference. OK, I added a normative reference to RFC 3629. Thanks a lot for the review. Best regards Michael >
- [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protoc… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-pr… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-pr… Michael Tuexen