[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-george-travel-faq-03

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Fri, 10 February 2012 17:15 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-george-travel-faq-03
Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date: 2012-02-10
IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-06
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:
List construction throughout is a little haphazard. Check
capitalization in particular.
s/Souvenier/Souvenir/