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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 22 January 2015 06:54 UTC

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Thanks for your review, Francis.

jari

On 31 Dec 2014, at 15:08, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20141224
> IETF LC End Date: 20141224
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
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> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this"
>  the term "should" is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword
>  and SHOULD is better, or it is not and a different word should be used.
>  Note I don't know the authors' intention so the best solution.
> 
> Regards
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> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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