[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 31 December 2014 14:09 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141224 IETF LC End Date: 20141224 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this" the term "should" is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword and SHOULD is better, or it is not and a different word should be used. Note I don't know the authors' intention so the best solution. Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-en… Francis Dupont
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtl… Michael Tuexen
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtl… Jari Arkko