Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-sip-eku-05.txt

["Vijay K. Gurbani" <[e-mail]>]

Francis Dupont wrote:
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
> you may receive. 

Francis: Thank you for your review of the draft.  More inline.

> Nits/editorial comments: 
> (I apologize to have been late to send this review)
>  - 1.2 page 3: X.680 [5],X.690 [6]. -> X.680 [5], X.690 [6].

Thanks, will fix with any other comments from IETF LC.

>  - 3 page 4:
>    the application need not recognize -> needs???
>    (BTW the spelling error, if it is an error, is in RFC 5280)

I believe that in this context, "need" is grammatically
correct -- "needs not recognize..." does not seem to read very
well.

> PS: I don't comment about the EKU idea, I've seen some PKI experts in
> Acknowledgments so I expect you do the right thing.

Yes; the draft was socialized extensively with PKIX WG.  We
even had a WG meeting slot to present the work and solicit
face-to-face comments from PKIX during the formation of the
work.  The LC in SIP also was CC'd to the PKIX WG and
comments solicited from that as well.

Thank you.

- vijay
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