Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-2140bis-09

Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com> Tue, 16 March 2021 21:51 UTC

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Hi, Theresa,

FYI - v10 just posted.

Please let me know if this update needs further adjusting.

Joe

> On Mar 15, 2021, at 11:25 PM, Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com> wrote:
> 
> FWIW, an update is coming soon. Regarding one point below:
> 
>> On Mar 3, 2021, at 6:28 PM, Theresa Enghardt <ietf@tenghardt.net <mailto:ietf@tenghardt.net>> wrote:
>> 
>>>> For a better overview, maybe it would help if these discussion
>>>> points/considerations were grouped by the TCB value being discussed, and
>>>> possibly provided as a list?
>>> This is a useful idea; we’ll see what we can do in the next update.
> 
> Upon examination, this doesn’t appear easily possible, as there are different sets of options discussed in each paragraph and the sets overlap.
> 
> Joe