Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@nokia.com> Wed, 10 December 2008 12:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)
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On 2008-12-10, at 10:15, mike@eisler.com wrote:
> I fixed the references to obsolete standards.

You fixed some, but not all. I'll leave the following (edited) RFC  
Editor Note in place: "Please make the following replacements to the  
document references: RFC2960 -> RFC4960, RFC1831 -> draft-ietf-nfsv4- 
rfc1831bis"

> As an FYI, I have been relying
> on rfc-editor.org check if RFC numbers were obsolete or not. It did  
> not
> classify  several  RFCs as obsolete.

The missing case was RFC793 obsoleting RFC675; the other ones were  
there. I asked the RFC Editor to add that.

Lars

PS: Robert, we can continue the discussion of your gen-art review  
while this document enters IESG Evaluation.
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