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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dprive-edns0-padding-02

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Fri, 26 February 2016 20:17 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-dprive-edns0-padding-02
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Feb-26-2016
IETF LC End Date: Not known
IESG Telechat date: Mar-03-2016

This document is ready as a Proposed Standard.

1 nit below.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  1

Nits:

- S6, second paragraph:
  s/provides only a benefit/only provides a benefit/

Thanks,

- vijay
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