Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dprive-edns0-padding-02

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 02 March 2016 18:21 UTC

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Thanks for your review, Vijay!!

Jari

On 26 Feb 2016, at 22:17, Vijay K. Gurbani <vkg@bell-labs.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-dprive-edns0-padding-02
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: Feb-26-2016
> IETF LC End Date: Not known
> IESG Telechat date: Mar-03-2016
> 
> This document is ready as a Proposed Standard.
> 
> 1 nit below.
> 
> Major: 0
> Minor: 0
> Nits:  1
> 
> Nits:
> 
> - S6, second paragraph:
> s/provides only a benefit/only provides a benefit/
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> - vijay
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