Re: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-enum-xmpp-01.txt

[Miguel Garcia <[e-mail]>]

Excellent. Thanks.

Alexander Mayrhofer wrote:
> Miguel,
> 
> Thanks for performing the review. Please find my comments inline.
> 
>> Comments:
>>
>> 1) The document should be a bit more clear on which registry 
>> IANA has to 
>> operate on. In particular, Section 8 does not mention the 
>> "Enumservice 
>> Registrations" registry (which is the proper name). 
>> Suggestion: modify 
>> the first paragraph in Section 8 to read:
>>
>> This memo requests IANA to add a new "XMPP" Enumervice to the 
>> Enumservice Registrations registry, according to the 
>> definitions in this 
>> document and RFC 3761 [1].
> 
> I have changed the first paragraph as you suggested, it now reads:
> 
>    This memo requests IANA to add a new "XMPP" Enumservice to the
>    'Enumservice Registrations' registry, according to the definitions in
>    this document and RFC 3761 [1].
> 
>> 2) I find a bit weird that references 2 (E.164) and 7 (XMPP) are 
>> normative. I think a reader don't need to understand E.164 or XMPP to 
>> implement this specification. As long as the reader 
>> understand ENUM, and 
>> the XMPP URI/IRI, it is sufficient from an implementation 
>> point of view. 
>> So in my opinion these references are informative.
> 
> Agreed, moved to informative. The new "References" section now looks
> like:
> 
> 10.  References
> 
> 10.1.  Normative References
> 
>    [1]  Faltstrom, P. and M. Mealling, "The E.164 to Uniform Resource
>         Identifiers (URI) Dynamic Delegation Discovery System (DDDS)
>         Application (ENUM)", RFC 3761, April 2004.
> 
>    [2]  Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement
>         Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119, March 1997.
> 
>    [3]  Berners-Lee, T., Fielding, R., and L. Masinter, "Uniform
>         Resource Identifier (URI): Generic Syntax", STD 66, RFC 3986,
>         January 2005.
> 
>    [4]  Duerst, M. and M. Suignard, "Internationalized Resource
>         Identifiers (IRIs)", RFC 3987, January 2005.
>    [5]  Saint-Andre, P., "Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRIs)
>         and Uniform Resource Identifiers (URIs) for the Extensible
>         Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP)", RFC 4622, August 2006.
> 
> 10.2.  Informative References
> 
>    [6]  Mockapetris, P., "Domain names - Implementation and
>         Specification", STD 13, RFC 1035, November 1987.
> 
>    [7]  ITU-T, "The international public telecommunication numbering
>         plan", Recommendation E.164 (02/05), Feb 2005.
> 
>    [8]  Yergeau, F., Paoli, J., Sperberg-McQueen, C., Bray, T., and E.
>         Maler, "Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)",
>         W3C REC REC-xml-20040204, February 2004.
> 
>    [9]  Saint-Andre, P., Ed., "Extensible Messaging and Presence
>         Protocol (XMPP): Core", RFC 3920, October 2004.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Alex
> 
> 
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