[Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-enum-xmpp-01.txt
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Miguel, Thanks for performing the review. Please find my comments inline. > Comments: > > 1) The document should be a bit more clear on which registry > IANA has to > operate on. In particular, Section 8 does not mention the > "Enumservice > Registrations" registry (which is the proper name). > Suggestion: modify > the first paragraph in Section 8 to read: > > This memo requests IANA to add a new "XMPP" Enumervice to the > Enumservice Registrations registry, according to the > definitions in this > document and RFC 3761 [1]. I have changed the first paragraph as you suggested, it now reads: This memo requests IANA to add a new "XMPP" Enumservice to the 'Enumservice Registrations' registry, according to the definitions in this document and RFC 3761 [1]. > 2) I find a bit weird that references 2 (E.164) and 7 (XMPP) are > normative. I think a reader don't need to understand E.164 or XMPP to > implement this specification. As long as the reader > understand ENUM, and > the XMPP URI/IRI, it is sufficient from an implementation > point of view. > So in my opinion these references are informative. Agreed, moved to informative. The new "References" section now looks like: 10. References 10.1. Normative References [1] Faltstrom, P. and M. Mealling, "The E.164 to Uniform Resource Identifiers (URI) Dynamic Delegation Discovery System (DDDS) Application (ENUM)", RFC 3761, April 2004. [2] Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119, March 1997. [3] Berners-Lee, T., Fielding, R., and L. Masinter, "Uniform Resource Identifier (URI): Generic Syntax", STD 66, RFC 3986, January 2005. [4] Duerst, M. and M. Suignard, "Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRIs)", RFC 3987, January 2005. [5] Saint-Andre, P., "Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRIs) and Uniform Resource Identifiers (URIs) for the Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP)", RFC 4622, August 2006. 10.2. Informative References [6] Mockapetris, P., "Domain names - Implementation and Specification", STD 13, RFC 1035, November 1987. [7] ITU-T, "The international public telecommunication numbering plan", Recommendation E.164 (02/05), Feb 2005. [8] Yergeau, F., Paoli, J., Sperberg-McQueen, C., Bray, T., and E. Maler, "Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)", W3C REC REC-xml-20040204, February 2004. [9] Saint-Andre, P., Ed., "Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP): Core", RFC 3920, October 2004. Thanks, Alex _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-en… Miguel Garcia
- [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-iet… Alexander Mayrhofer
- Re: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft… Miguel Garcia