[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-enum-xmpp-01.txt
Miguel Garcia <Miguel.Garcia@nsn.com> Mon, 30 April 2007 12:40 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-enum-xmpp-01.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-enum-xmpp-01.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.garcia@nsn.com> Review Date: 2007-04-30 IETF LC End Date: 2007-05-10 Summary: The document is basically ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Comments: 1) The document should be a bit more clear on which registry IANA has to operate on. In particular, Section 8 does not mention the "Enumservice Registrations" registry (which is the proper name). Suggestion: modify the first paragraph in Section 8 to read: This memo requests IANA to add a new "XMPP" Enumervice to the Enumservice Registrations registry, according to the definitions in this document and RFC 3761 [1]. 2) I find a bit weird that references 2 (E.164) and 7 (XMPP) are normative. I think a reader don't need to understand E.164 or XMPP to implement this specification. As long as the reader understand ENUM, and the XMPP URI/IRI, it is sufficient from an implementation point of view. So in my opinion these references are informative. BR, Miguel Garcia -- Please note my new e-mail address: miguel.garcia at nsn.com Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586 Nokia Siemens Networks Helsinki, Finland _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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