Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-09

[Pushpasis Sarkar <[e-mail]>]

Hi Meral,

I have addressed all your comments and uploaded version 10. Thanks once
again for the detailed review. Please let me know if you have any further
comments.

Thanks and regards,
-Pushpasis

On Thu, Dec 29, 2016 at 10:33 PM, Meral Shirazipour <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi,
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>   Many thanks for the response.
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> *From:* Pushpasis Sarkar [mailto:[e-mail]]
> *Sent:* Thursday, December 29, 2016 12:20 AM
> *To:* Meral Shirazipour <[e-mail]>
> *Cc:* [e-mail];
> [e-mail]
> *Subject:* Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-
> protection-09
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> Hi Meral,
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> First, many many thanks to you for the detailed review comments. :)
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> Next, please find few replies inline. Rest of the comments has been
> accepted as is, and will be addressed soon.
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> Thanks
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> -Pushpasis
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> On Wed, Dec 28, 2016 at 11:03 PM, Meral Shirazipour <
> [e-mail]> wrote:
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <
> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-09
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2016-12-28
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> IETF LC End Date:   2017-01-04 (extension 2017-01-11)
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> IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-05 (extended)
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> Summary:
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> This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
> comments.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> -Please spell out Loop-Free Alternate (LFA), Shortest Path First (SPF) at
> first use.
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> -typo in draft header:
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> "Internet-Draft   R-LFA Node-Protection and Manageabilty    December 2016"
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>                 "Manageabilty"--should be-->"Manageability"
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> -Same typo in Section 3 header: "Manageabilty of Remote-LFA Alternate
> Paths"
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>                 "Manageabilty"--should be-->"Manageability"
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> -[Page 6] Section 2.2.3.
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> "on any of the shortest path", path -->"paths"
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> -[Page 6] Section 2.2.3.
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> "from the node Y to primary nexthop E":
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> "one ECMP path from the node Y":
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> -->the example in this draft did not use the letter Y for any nodes. Would
> it be clearer to say node Y is defined in Section 2.2.4?
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> -Few occurences of "w.r.t to ", the "to" is redundant.
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> -[Page 1], "can be utilised "--->"can be utilized"
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> -[Page 9], Section 2.3
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> "Sections Section 2.3.1 and Section 2.3.2 shows "--->"Section 2.3.1 and
> Section 2.3.2 show"
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> -[Page 11], "To determine wether"--->"To determine whether"
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> -[Page 11], "primary nexthop node"-->"primary nexthop nodes"
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> -[Page 13], "choose only the ones that does"--->"choose only the ones that
> do"
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> -[Page 13], "not gaurantee"--->"not guarantee"
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> -[Page 14], "Figure 7: Toplogy with multiple ECMP primary
> nexthops"--->"Figure 7: Topology with multiple ECMP primary nexthops"
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> -[Page 14], "node-proecting"--->"node-protecting"
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> -[Page 15], "paths tp PQ-node R2"--->"paths to PQ-node R2"
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> -[Page 16], "gaurantees node-protection"--->"guarantees node-protection"
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> -[Page 17],  "above example above"--->"above example"
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> -[Page 17], "also allow user"--->"also allow the user"
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> -[Page 18], "the the computing"---->"the computing"
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> -[Page 18], "in section Section 2.3.2."---->"in Section 2.3.2." (2
> occurrences)
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> -[Page 18], "in section Section 2.3 the"---->"in Section 2.3 the"
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> -[Page 18], "i.e from "---->"i.e. from "
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> -[Page 18], "two Remote-LFA alternate path"--->"two Remote-LFA alternate
> paths"
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> -[Page 19], "the approach proposed"----->"the proposed approach "
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> -[Page 19], "is needed keep "---->"is needed to keep"
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> -[Page 19], "entire toplogy"---->"entire topology"
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> -General: Is there any proof or extensive simulation that has proved that
> the mechanism proposed works for various network topologies and not only
> the one shown in the examples?
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> [Pushpasis] These mechanisms has been implemented (by atleast one vendor,
> to my knowledge) and has been extensively tested in few of the operator's
> network. As is the case with L-FA (RFC 5286) and R-LFA(RFC 7490)
> specifications, these mechanisms either provide you with a backup
> alternate, or does not. But if a backup is verified using these mechanism,
> it is 100% guaranteed to be loop-free. As you might be already be aware of,
> R-LFA is more suited towards ring-like network topologies. None of these
> mechanisms always provide 100% backup coverage (i.e. they do not always let
> you discover all the possible/feasible backup paths). But depending on
> actual topologies, they can provide coverage somewhere between 100%-86%.
> You may want to refer to RFC 7490 section 9. Please let me know if you need
> any further information on this.
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> Thanks
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> -Pushpasis
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> ---
>
> Meral Shirazipour
>
> Ericsson Research
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> www.ericsson.com
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