[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-02

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Fri, 06 September 2013 20:35 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-02
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-02
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Sep-6-2013
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Unknown

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has one minor issue
that should be fixed (or at least looked at) before publication.

Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits: 0

Minor issue:

- This is a document on the standards track.  Therefore, it is rather
  disconcerting to see the following statement in the draft (end of
  Section 2): "[This document] is not a panacea, nor is it a deep and
  thorough approach to flap reduction."

  I understand the panacea part, it is the trailing phrase that I want
  to draw attention to.

  Now, I am not a routing expert so I would presume that despite the
  exhortations above, the chairs of the WG and the AD have looked at
  the document and are comfortable with the sentence I have pointed out.
  (Sorry if it has been discussed in the WG.)  Assuming that is the
  case, I am happy to proceed with this document.  Assuming it is not,
  would an Experimental designation be appropriate?

Thanks,

- vijay
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