[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call 
comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05 
Reviewer: Pasi Eronen
Review Date: 30 May 2007
IETF LC End Date: 06 June 2007
IESG Telechat date: (not known yet)

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:

1) Section 8.2 "[IS-IS-CAP] defines a new code point registry for
sub-TLVs carried in the ISIS CAPABILITY TLV". The current version of
[IS-IS-CAP] does not seem to define any new IANA-maintained
registries. This may be an bug in [IS-IS-CAP]?

2) Section 8.3: the bit numbers in this section don't match the bit
numbers in Sections 4.1/4.2.

3) As noted in the proto write-up, there's a normative downref (RFC
3784). This downref was not called out in the IETF last call message,
and it's not listed in the downref registry.

Best regards,
Pasi

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