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Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Wed, 12 October 2016 15:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18
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On 10/12/16 12:55 AM, Eggert, Lars wrote:
> Hi,
>
> thanks for the review!
>
> On 2016-10-11, at 21:21, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:
>> (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but it has been removed.)
>
> I think this can be addressed by an RFC Editor Note.

Sure.

>> (2) NIT: unlinked references
>>
>> I found a number of cases where, in the html format, references are not hyperlinked:
>>
>> [RFC4342] section 3
>> [RFC6679] section 3.1.7
>> [RFC1981] section 3.2
>> [RFC6935] section 3.4.1
>
> As mentioned before, these are due to bugs in the rfcmarkup tool. Please file a bug report.

Sorry - I forgot you mentioned this before.

	Thanks,
	Paul

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