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Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

"Eggert, Lars" <lars@netapp.com> Wed, 12 October 2016 04:55 UTC

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From: "Eggert, Lars" <lars@netapp.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Hi,

thanks for the review!

On 2016-10-11, at 21:21, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:
> (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but it has been removed.)

I think this can be addressed by an RFC Editor Note.

> (2) NIT: unlinked references
> 
> I found a number of cases where, in the html format, references are not hyperlinked:
> 
> [RFC4342] section 3
> [RFC6679] section 3.1.7
> [RFC1981] section 3.2
> [RFC6935] section 3.4.1

As mentioned before, these are due to bugs in the rfcmarkup tool. Please file a bug report.

Lars

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