[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-agent-flags-03.txt

Thanks for your review, Gonzalo!

I have placed corrections to the issues you listed
as RFC Editor notes in the tracker.

Jari

Gonzalo Camarillo kirjoitti:
>
> Hi,
>
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
>
> Draft: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-agent-flags-03.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
> Review Date: 25 Mayo 2006
>
> Summary:
>
> This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.
>
>
> Comments:
>
> The acronym DHCP should be expanded on its first use in the title and in
> the abstract.
>
> Last line of the first paragraph of the Introduction:
>
> The period should go after the references:
>
> OLD:
> DHCP Server.  [RFC2131] [RFC2132] [RFC3046]
>
> NEW:
> DHCP Server  [RFC2131] [RFC2132] [RFC3046].
>             ^                              ^
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gonzalo
>
>

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