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Mark Stapp <mjs@cisco.com> Fri, 25 May 2007 12:27 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-agent-flags-03.txt
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Gonzalo,
Thanks for the feedback. I'll include your edits in a new revision.

Regards,
Mark

Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> 
> Draft: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-agent-flags-03.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
> Review Date: 25 Mayo 2006
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.
> 
> 
> Comments:
> 
> The acronym DHCP should be expanded on its first use in the title and in
> the abstract.
> 
> Last line of the first paragraph of the Introduction:
> 
> The period should go after the references:
> 
> OLD:
> DHCP Server.  [RFC2131] [RFC2132] [RFC3046]
> 
> NEW:
> DHCP Server  [RFC2131] [RFC2132] [RFC3046].
>            ^                              ^
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 


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