[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6man-flow-update-07

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Wed, 13 July 2011 22:16 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-6man-flow-update-07
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2011-07-13
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-07-14

Summary: One clarification needed

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

It isn't clear to me what the document means by "stateful" vs.
"stateless" assignment
of flow labels.  Approximating a uniform distribution with a hash
function or PRNG
requires some sort of state such as a seed or sequence number which is updated
after each assignment, yes?  Or were you referring to the statefulness
of intermediate
routers that identify a flow by port number and then remember the flow
label assignment
they chose?

Nits/editorial comments: None