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Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 29 July 2016 00:38 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.


Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-nxdomain-cut-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2016-07-28
IETF LC End Date:  2016-07-29
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 2], "to the querier"--suggested-->"to the requester"
-[Page 3], "subtrees etc)."----->"subtrees etc.)."
-[Page 5], "have to forward"--->"has to forward"
-[Page 6], "stop searching"--->"stops searching"
-[Page 8-9], Ref "I-D.fujiwara-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse" to be updated.

-General: would be best to spell out some of the acronyms (SOA, TLD, RR etc.).


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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