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Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 17 February 2021 20:47 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
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Paul, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for the updates. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Feb 8, 2021, at 3:45 PM, Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Paul,
> Many thanks for your review. I will update the next version with the nits.
> Thanks
> Bala'zs
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> 
> Sent: Wednesday, February 3, 2021 6:20 PM
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> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2021-02-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
> IESG Telechat date: ?
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.
> 
> General:
> 
> I'm unqualified to meaningfully comment on the technical quality of this document. I've reviewed it for form.
> 
> Issues:
> 
> Major: 0
> Minor: 0
> Nits:  2
> 
> 1) NIT: Unlinked references
> 
> In section 1 paragraph 2, and section 3 paragraph 1, there are references to [RFC8939] that are not linked.
> 
> 2) NIT: From IdNits
> 
> IdNits reports:
> 
>   == Outdated reference: A later version (-14) exists of
>      draft-ietf-detnet-security-12
> 
> There are a couple of other warnings, but they are spurious.
> 
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