[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-dual-homing-protection-05

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Tue, 07 February 2017 18:13 UTC

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Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-dual-homing-protection-05
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2017-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-02

Summary: Ready

Major Concerns:  None

Minor Concerns:  None


In the last sentence of the first paragraph of Section 1, the
says: "This mechanism is only applicable ..."  I believe that this is
a reference to the repair mechanism that is defined in
[I-D.ietf-pals-endpoint-fast-protection], not the mechanism that is
defined in this document.  Please replace "This mechanism" with a
clear reference.


I see that draft-cheng-pwe3-mpls-tp-dual-homing-protection the
Internet-Draft file name for this document.  An IPR declaration was
issued against that earlier name.  The shepherd write-up indicates
"The WG were not concerned about the IPR disclosure." However, it is
unclear to me whether we should ask for the IPR declaration to be
against the current Internet-Draft file name.