[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-nfsdirect-06.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 10 October 2007 13:11 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-nfsdirect-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2007-10-10 IETF LC End Date: 2007-10-12 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost ready Comments: I have to finish to read it but I have a problem with the (ab)use of abbrevations in the Abstract (outside the Abstract a reference can make not introduced abbrevations understable). Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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