[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-class-aggr-04.txt

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Thanks.

Kwok, do you feel you can handle these?

Fred

On Oct 9, 2007, at 8:45 AM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
>
> Draft: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-class-aggr-04.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
> Review Date: 8 October 2007
>
> Summary:
>
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that  
> should
> be fixed before publication.
>
>
> Comments:
>
> This draft is Informational and does not seem to contain any normative
> text. If this is actually the case, Section 1.1 with its reference to
> RFC 2119 should be removed.
>
> A set of acronyms are not expanded. They should be expanded on their
> first use.
>
> References [1] and [2] are never used in the text.
>
> Abstracts should not contain references.
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gonzalo

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