Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Wed, 07 March 2012 20:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt
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I've entered it as an RFC Editor note.

On 3/7/12 1:35 PM, Eric Burger wrote:
> Good catch! Thanks for the review. Will definitely fix in AUTH48.
>
> On Mar 7, 2012, at 12:08 PM, Alexey Melnikov wrote:
>
>> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
>> reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
>>
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt
>> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
>> Review Date: 2012-03-07	
>> IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-08
>> IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-15
>>
>> Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC
>>
>> Major issues: none
>>
>> Minor issues: none
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>
>>
>>    | 433   | Unsupported   | the request contains  | RFC6231           |
>>    |       | collect and   |<collect>  and         |                   |
>>    |       | record        |<record>  elements and |                   |
>>    |       | capability    | the MS does support   |                   |
>>
>> "does support" -->  "does not support" ?
>>
>>    |       |               | these operations      |                   |
>>    |       |               | simultaneously        |                   |
>>