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To: Ulrich Windl <Ulrich.Windl@rz.uni-regensburg.de>, tievens@cisco.com, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Cc: last-call@ietf.org, "ntp@ietf.org" <ntp@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model.all@ietf.org
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On 15/02/2021 08:54, Ulrich Windl wrote:
>>>> Tim Evens via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> schrieb am 13.02.2021 um 00:51
> in
> Nachricht <161317387496.31377.7416127213693172983@ietfa.amsl.com>:
>
> ...
>> Are the backslashes required here? It seems that many examples have them
>> when
>> there is a value and the closing tag is not on the same line.  For example:
> ...
>>             <associations‑address>192.0.2.1\
>>             </associations‑address>
>
> I think the backslash is no syntactic element IN XML; it's probably an
> indoicator that those lines should be ONE for XML input.
> Some XML lines are just long...


Backslash is a YANG convention where lines have been folded to fit the 
rules of the RFC Editor but YANG/XML does not want them folded.

This is usually accompanied with a reference to
draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding RFC8792

Tom Petch

>
> Regards,
> Ulrich
>
>

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