[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-pbb-te-06.txt
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-pbb-te-06.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. After the -06 version was posted, IESG discussion resulted in a couple of RFC Editor notes that address the open issues from the Gen-ART review of -05. The following 3 IANA-related nits still need attention: - In Section 4.1, remove the note to IANA after 2) and instead insert this instruction into Section 7. - In Figure 4, the type is TBA. Add an instruction to Section 7 for IANA to fill this in after it is allocated. - In the fourth bullet in Section 7, please state that the registry is created by the MLN-EXT draft if that is the case. It looks like IANA has figured out at least the third of these, but follow-up w/IANA is already needed because one of the RFC Editor Notes removes an IANA Action. That follow-up should be used to confirm that the planned IANA Actions match what was intended. The entire Gen-ART review of the -05 version is below. Thanks, --David > -----Original Message----- > From: Black, David > Sent: Thursday, August 26, 2010 1:01 PM > To: 'gen-art@ietf.org'; donald.fedyk@alcatel-lucent.com; hshah@force10networks.com; > nabil.n.bitar@verizon.com; attila.takacs@ericsson.com > Cc: Black, David; Lou Berger; Deborah Brungard; Adrian Farrel; Daniel King; 'ccamp@ietf.org' > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-pbb-te-05.txt > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . > > Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. > > Summary: > This draft is on the right track, but has open issues, described in the review. > > This draft describes the use of a GMPLS control plane to configure explicit forwarding in Ethernet > bridges for PBB-TE (Provider Backbone Bridge Traffic Engineering). > > In general, the draft is in good shape; the two open issues are in Section 5.1.2 and are minor: > - Is the "has to allocate a VID" statement in Section 5.1.2 correct when shared forwarding > is in use as described in Section 3.1 ? > - The error value: MPLS Label allocation failure (9) appears to be inconsistent with the > second bullet in Section 7 that requests IANA to allocate a new error value: "PBB-TE > Ethernet Label VID allocation failure" (suggested value: 35?) for this case. > > Nits: > > In Section 2, what are the I and B components of an IB-BEB? Interface and Bridge? > > In Figure 1, the VIP acronym is not in Section 2's list of acronyms. > > In Section 4.1, remove the note to IANA after 2) and instead insert this instruction into Section 7. > > In Figure 4, the type is TBA. Add an instruction to Section 7 for IANA to fill this in after it is > allocated. > > In the fourth bullet in Section 7, please state that the registry is created by the MLN-EXT draft if > that is the case. > > idnits 2.12.04 ran clean. > > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 > +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 > david.black@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 > ---------------------------------------------------- >
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