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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-pbb-te-06.txt

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From: david.black@emc.com
To: Adrian.Farrel@huawei.com
Date: Mon, 04 Oct 2010 09:13:06 -0400
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That'll suffice, Thanks, --David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:Adrian.Farrel@huawei.com]
> Sent: Saturday, October 02, 2010 4:12 AM
> To: Black, David
> Cc: lberger@labn.net; dbrungard@att.com; daniel@olddog.co.uk; ccamp@ietf.org; Black, David; gen-
> art@ietf.org; donald.fedyk@alcatel-lucent.com; hshah@force10networks.com; nabil.n.bitar@verizon.com;
> attila.takacs@ericsson.com
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-pbb-te-06.txt
> 
> Thanks David,
> 
> [snip]
> 
> > The following 3 IANA-related nits still need attention:
> >
> > - In Section 4.1, remove the note to IANA after 2) and instead
> > insert this instruction into Section 7.
> 
> This is already the first bullet point in Section 7.
> The RFC Editor will spot "suggested value" in 4.1 and update it.
> 
> > - In Figure 4, the type is TBA.  Add an instruction to Section 7 for IANA
> > to fill this in after it is allocated.
> 
> RFC Editor has the practice of searching for TBA and replacing with the
> values assigned by IANA.
> 
> > - In the fourth bullet in Section 7, please state that the registry is
> > created
> > by the MLN-EXT draft if that is the case.
> 
> This was already added in -06
> 
> Thanks,
> Adrian
>

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