Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 03 December 2015 12:10 UTC

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Meral: Many thanks for your review - much appreciated.

Jari

On 02 Dec 2015, at 09:49, Dong Jiang <knight.dongjiang@gmail.com> wrote:

> Dear Meral,
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> Thank you for your review. We'll revise the draft accordingly.
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> Best regards,
> Jiang Dong
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> 2015-11-26 1:52 GMT+02:00 Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>om>:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.
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> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2015-11-25
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> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15
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> IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> -[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types is"
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> -[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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