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Matthew Kerwin <matthew.kerwin@qut.edu.au> Tue, 13 December 2016 23:27 UTC

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From: Matthew Kerwin <matthew.kerwin@qut.edu.au>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14
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Hi,

From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, 7 December 2016 16:23
>
> Hi,
>
>>Thanks for the review, it dovetails nicely with other feedback I've 
>>received.
>>
>>Elsewhere this text has been suggested for the abstract:
>>
>>> This document provides a full specification of the "file" Uniform 
>>> Resource Identifier (URI) scheme, replacing the very brief definition 
>>> in Section 3.10 of RFC 1738.
>>
>>Does that go some way to resolve the ambiguity there? It doesn't use 
>>the words "update" or "obsolete" but it seems to me that it says what 
>>it needs to.
>
>I am fine with ³replace² :)
>
>Regards,
>
>Christer


I've published version 15, could you please have a look and see if it
addresses your questions?  The pertinent changes are:

* The abstract now says basically what I quoted above.  I think the
rewording resolves most of your original questions about what is being
updated and how.

* There is some text in the introduction around the exceptions to
"compatible with most existing usages."  Basically it points to the very
loose description in RFC1738, and the gradual tightening of specs since then
which "file:" otherwise avoided.  There's also a pointer to Appendix A
"Differences from Previous Specifications".

* The acknowledgements section has been rewritten, and now has no formal
callbacks to the previous RFCs or drafts.

Cheers

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