[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-core-http-mapping-13.txt

[Francis Dupont <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-ietf-core-http-mapping-13.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160829
IETF LC End Date: 20160822
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - Abstract page 1: please expand the CoAP abbrev at first use.

 - ToC page 3 and 11 page 29: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 3: again please expand the CoAP abbrev at first use.

 - 3 page 6, 5.4.2 page 12, 5.5 page 13, and 7 note 4 page 22:
  i.e. -> i.e.,

 - 5.3 page 9 (twice), 5.4.2 page 12, 6.2 page 16, 6.2 page 17 (3 times),
   6.6 Fig 2 page 19, 7 note 7 page 22, 8.3 page 24, and 10.2 page 28:
  e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 5.4.1.1 page 10: IMHO the 1. Target CoAP URI ... should be on the
  next page (BTW leave this to the RFC Editor).

 - 5.4.2.1 page 12: same comment about "2. Target CoAP URI ..."

 - 5.4.2.1 page 13: perhaps a missing "on" at the end of:
  http://p.example.com/hc/?s=coap&hp=s.example.com&p=/light&q=

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