Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01
Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Mon, 13 May 2013 10:34 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01
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Forwarding to the authors and WG Regards, Benoit > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01 > Common YANG Data Types > Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern > Review Date: 19-April-2013 > IETF LC End Date: 1-May-2013 > IESG Telechat date: N/A > > Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Standards > Track RFC > > Major issues: > (The following may well be a non-issue.) > In the revision of the ietf-inet-types, the patterns for the new > ip4-address-no-zone and ipv6-address-no-zone are drastically > simplified from the ipv4-address and ipv6-address patterns. The new > ipv4-address-no-zone allows any sequence of decimal digits an periods, > while the original was carefully defined as dotted quads of 0..255. > Similarly, te ipv6-address-no-zone allows any arbitrary sequence of > hex digits and colons. The original patterns were very careful to > match rules for validity. Is there a reason for the change. > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > >
- [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2013… A. Jean Mahoney
- [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01 Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6… Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Andy Bierman
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Benoit Claise
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Benoit Claise
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-b… Jari Arkko