[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 06 November 2015 23:19 UTC
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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-11-06 IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -Please consider spelling out all acronyms, e.g. NLRI-NH -[Page 4], 6.1,"If the software"--?-->"softwire" -[Page 13], "vulnerability:" --?-->"vulnerability." Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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