[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 26 January 2018 23:37 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bier-mvpn-09 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-01-26 IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-30 IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 5], Sec 2, "may replaced"---->"may be replaced" -Section 9.1, ref [BIER_ARCH] is now RFC Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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